evaluation

 Based on the responses that were given, they seem to all have an understanding of the message that was being portrayed which shows that the dialogue of the characters was good so this means that there is not any adjustments that have to be made to the script which means that the script has exceeded the idea of the audience being able to understand the message that is being given to the viewers, this allows us to be able to focus on other aspects that may need improvement.

The improvements that have to be made to the radio is mainly regarding the audio of the radio itself this is due to the unwanted background noise limiting the success of the radio which seems to be the most common problem with the radio that is viewed by the respondents and is something that will need to be fixed, another improvement is that it was too long for the viewers which affects their view of how well the radio did and their views on it. the respondents also felt that it lacked in other areas such as the narrator had an affect on the impact of the dialogue which means that it is also something that needs to be worked on in order to improve the radio itself.

overall, the message of the radio is quite clear for the respondents to understand so this means that there are not any changes that need to be made to the script for the radio, but there are also adjustments that still need to be made to the radio in order to perfect it but they are not really significant changes to be made so therefore the overall radio is pretty clear and easy for audience to understand,